After an unintentional break (thanks to unexpected road trips and catching up on post-vacation tasks), I’m more than ready to jump back into flash fictioning. I can think of no better way to do that than with this week’s prompt over at Carrot Ranch: In 99 words (no more, no less) use sound to create a story. Just as you might “see” a scene unfold, think about how it might sound. Even one sound to set the tone is okay.
Mine ended up being creepier than I initially imagined. Enjoy!
The Chimes
A familiar chord greets me as I step onto the curb. Amazing those old wind chimes carry this far. As the Uber drives away, I stare at my childhood home. Its color has faded in the past twenty years.
But that E-chord still sounds, not as cleanly but definitely as present. I follow it across the dead grass, through the rusty metal gate, and into the back yard.
She sits on the porch, the chimes ringing above her despite the still air.
Her focus centers on me, and a chill shoots through my body.
“I knew you’d come back.”
Nice job! I liked it.
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Wow, Charli was right, and still hiding behind my note book, oooooou, I’m outa here. Great read!
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LOL. Thanks! 😁
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Your welcome… 🙂
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Oh, wow, and you returned with a humdinger of a flash. I can hear those chimes and create a sharp image of the scene in my mind…now make it go away! Hope your travels were better than this. 🙂
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They were! LOL 😊
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I’m left wanting more despite the chill shooting up my spine.
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Funny how that happens. 😊
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Spooky!
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Loved it Allison.
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Thanks! 😊
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How on earth do you do that in just 99 words? I will have to practice this…
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😁
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Excellent Alison, and I felt the chill..
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Thanks! And good. 😉
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