We interrupt our A-Z blogging series to bring you a 99-word flash fiction piece, inspired by the prompt over at Carrot Ranch: In 99 words (no more, no less) write about a ring. Keep the definition to that of a piece of jewelry. Whose ring is it and what’s its significance?
Here goes!
Junk
“Daddy!” Reese tugs at my sleeve. “Toy!” She points to the dispenser full of opaque plastic eggs.
“Honey…” I crouch. “You can’t see what’s in those. You might get junk.”
“Please?” She bats her brown eyes.
I laugh. What the hell. Standing, I dig a coin from my pocket. She snatches it.
After three cranks, an egg plops out. She pops it open, removing a plastic ring with a square rhinestone. “Like Mommy’s!”
Her words choke me. It does look like my late wife’s ring. “You’re right. It is.”
“It’s not junk.” She skips ahead.
No, it sure isn’t.
Very poignant, Alison. Your story evokes a lot more than this one scene. I didn’t have time to join in this week but I too was toying with the idea of a ring from one of those slot machines. I wouldn’t have done nearly so well, but am pleased to see we’re thinking similar thoughts again.
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It is neat to see our ideas line up. 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
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Very sweet, and seasonally apt!
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Thanks! And I know. I’m a little proud of that. *brushes off shoulder*
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Captures surprise. Thought provoking unexpected end.
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Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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It seems like a daddy-daughter moment at the toy dispenser until we realize he’s a widower. Not junk, indeed. And you carried off the writing with the lightheartedness of the child’s innocence.
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I like your critiques. 😊
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It’s fun to write, read and figure out what works!
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Loved your flash!
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Thanks! 😊
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interesting, and cute 🙂
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Thanks. 🙂
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Touching. Well done.
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Thank you. 🙂
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