Yesterday, I read this great article by Nat Russo about how important it is for writers to master the craft before we start defending our style. Click on his name to read the whole thing (which I recommend), but here’s a chunk of it:
You’ve heard people do this. When you offer constructive criticism, they’ll say things like this:
- “I’m stringing multiple adverbs together here because that’s my style.”
- “I’m going to pepper my paragraphs with ellipses and EM-dashes because that’s my style.”
- “Proper comma usage isn’t my style.”
- “Plot and structure cramp my style. I need to be free of those arbitrary constraints.”
What these writers don’t realize is before they can strike off in their own direction as a master of the craft, they actually have to MASTER THE CRAFT.
Basically, you have to know the rules of writing before you can break them.
The article got me thinking about how I learned the rules of writing, and I realized how I learned is probably different from how most other writers learned. My author friends, family…basically anyone who knows me personally will tell you I’m a stickler when it comes to clean writing. That means I like it when grammar rules are followed. My mom gave me this sign for my birthday one year. I display it proudly in my dining room.
Everyone who sees it says this: That is so you.
I saw a picture frame in Hobby Lobby once that said “Grandma’s Are The Best” or something – I don’t remember what it really said, because I was stuck on the unnecessary apostrophe. I mean, how many eyes did that thing pass before it hit the shelf? Come on.
Anyway, the point is I know the rules, and I learned them because I taught them.
I taught in second- and third-grade classrooms for ten years before I transitioned to a reading/writing interventionist position for three years. During my time as a classroom teacher, my room was a “pilot class” for a new writing curriculum that I thought was effective at teaching the kids how to write coherently. I had third graders writing gorgeous paragraphs in a variety of genres. But the curriculum was ultimately dumped because while it taught the kids to write, it didn’t teach them how to pass standardized state tests. That’s a different post for a different day.
I mention that curriculum because much of what I learned about the basics of writing came from that. Yes, it was designed for elementary-aged students. But it’s been a while since most of us were that age, and good writing skills fall into the “If you don’t use it, you lose it” category. The items I’m about to mention are things I see often in my critique group and every single freaking day in social media. My eyelids twitch, but that might be an unrelated matter.
From teaching, I learned (among other things):
- The differences between simple, compound, complex, and compound/complex sentences and how to write them.
- Where to put a comma in a compound predicate (plot twist: you don’t put a comma in a compound predicate).
- What a comma splice is and how to fix it.
- How to use new paragraphs to discuss new ideas.
- The importance of sentence fluency.
- What a fragment is and how to fix it.
These items are ingrained into my head because I taught them. Instead of spending time figuring out where the comma goes, I can work on story elements like developing characters and making sure there aren’t plot holes.
What does this mean for you? I know most of us didn’t teach writing as a career, but that doesn’t mean there aren’t outlets to impart our knowledge. My fellow writers in the critique group teach me something every time I post a chapter, and I pass along what I know in my comments for their chapters. My favorite comments in my chapters say something to the effect of, “I just learned on such and such website that this is the correct way to use an ellipse.” I know that in teaching me that skill they learned, they are more likely to remember it forever and not have a bad habit creep into their work.
Yes, you can improve your skills as a writer from reading a book about it or talking to another writer. Go to webinars and conferences. Those are all great. But if you want to solidify your new skills quickly, figure out a way to teach them to someone else.
Do you have an outlet to teach what you learned? If so, tell us about it in the comments. If not, feel free to ask for recommendations!