Coming in just under the wire is my submission for this week’s flash fiction challenge over at Carrot Ranch, inspired by this prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes the open road.
Enjoy!
The Road
I pass under the last green light, sighing. Behind me is the city, the place I called home, and the person who made it impossible to stay: you.
I squeeze the wheel and glance in the rear view mirror.
My decision comes without explanation or apology, because you aren’t here to demand that I explain and apologize. I’ve shed the wet fur coat that is you. Funny how the one decision that may warrant an explanation won’t get one.
Ahead, the road stretches far, meeting the horizon. Somewhere along it is my future—one where I can simply live.
Allison Maruska 
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That is shaking a heavy burden. Well done!
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A great piece, Allison.
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Thanks, Robbie. 🙂
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This is awesome, Allison. How challenging to do this in 99 words. Can’t wait for the next one.
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Thanks! They’re fun to write. Glad you enjoyed it. ☺️
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No need to explain; actions speak louder than words.
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Indeed. 🙂
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Good one Allison.
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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