After missing two flash fiction challenges over at Carrot Ranch, I decided now was a good time to jump back in. And I picked a good week to do it, as it has to do with giving a crap.
This week’s prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that expresses a strong concern, something to give a crap about.
So here’s my take.
The Old Lady
On my way to her spot, I skip over the biggest sidewalk cracks, gripping my prize. Colton says stepping on a crack will break Mama’s back. I sometimes hit one but she’s okay.
The old lady is outside 7-11. She smiles big. “Child! What you got?”
I hold the paper bag out. “I did it! Learned all my sight words!”
“Oh, baby girl.” She sniffs the buttery smell. “Keep this. You don’t get treats often.”
“It’s yours. I don’t wanna hear no more about it.”
Smiling, she pops a piece of popcorn into her mouth, then one into mine.
Allison Maruska 
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What a child! In only 99 words, this character is rich and endearing. I like Elaine’s take, too which adds to the element that women are always in cycle — maiden, mother, crone — and have shared wisdom and connection.
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I may have to use this girl in other stories. I really like her. 😊
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I like this character!
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Beautiful. The Great Mother shows up in her many guises.
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Thanks. I like your take. 🙂
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